小作文范文解析
折线图
ThegraphshowsthenumberofoverseasvisitorstothreedifferentareasinaEuropeancountrybetweenand.
题目来源:年6月5日大陆雅思小作文
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题目大意
该图表显示了年至年期间,某欧洲国家三个不同地区的海外游客数量。
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思路解析
显然可见,湖区海外游客数量的趋势变化幅度最为显著:先大幅上升达到顶峰后又急剧下跌,建议最先描述这类动态趋势最为明显的折线。因为本题只有三条曲线,需要将这三条曲线的趋势变化进行细致描述。海边游客的趋势较为简单——先下降后上升。山区游客的趋势稍微复杂一些,建议合并描述——总体呈增长趋势,除了两个时间段内略有下降。
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高分范文示例
开始段——改写题目+整体概述:三个地区的海外游客数量总体皆呈上升趋势;湖区游客数量的趋势变化最为显著
ThelinegraphindicateshowmanyinternationaltouristsvisitedthreeseparateregionsinaEuropeannationduringa20-yearperiodfromto.Intotal,itcanbeobviouslyseenthatthenumbersofvisitorstothesethreeregionsallexperiencedanoverallupwardtrendandsignificantchangestookplaceregardingthefiguresoftouriststothelakes.
主体段1——前往湖区的海外游客数量大幅增长,达到峰值后又急剧下降
Tobespecific,therewerearound10,foreigntouristswhowereattractedtothelakesin.Afterthat,thenumbergrewsubstantiallytothepeakat75,in2beforedroppingsharplytoapproximately50,in.
主体段2——选择海边度假的海外游客数量一直稳居首位,总量经历小幅下跌后持续稳定增长
Inaddition,thenumberofforeignerswhochosetospendholidayatthecoastwasroughly40,in,makingthecoastthemostpopulardestinationoutofthethree.Thenext5yearswitnessedaslightdeclineinthenumberofvisitorstoaround36,,whichwasfollowedbyagradualclimbto75,in.
主体段3——选择山区度假的海外游客数量相对来说较少,总量虽然经历两次小幅下降,总体仍呈上升趋势
Ontheotherhand,themountainsremainedtheleastintriguingtraveloptionamongthesethreeplaces.Amoderateincreasewasseeninthenumberoftouristsgoingtothemountainousareasfrom20,into35,in,exceptmodestreductionsfromtoandfromto2respectively.
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句型积累
1.Therebe结构:“…therewerearound10,foreigntouristswhowereattractedtothelakesin…”
2.描述对象的数量为主语:“…thenumberofforeignerswhochosetospendholidayatthecoastwasroughly40,in…”
3.时间段为主语:“…Thenext5yearswitnessedaslightdeclineinthenumberofvisitorstoaround36,…”
4.趋势为主语:“…Amoderateincreasewasseeninthenumberoftouristsgoingtothemountainousareasfrom20,into35,in…”